ONLY MY SHADOWS AND NOT MUCH MORE
Such appears the fate of many forgotten elderly individuals living out their days. Lonely and alone indeed.
so sad but true ...thank you for sharing
it's so sad sometimes when they are left in a world on their own..much loneliness in your lines..
Quite the melancholy bit...I too saw a certain sadness in the prompt, the loneliness...
Just makes you want to cry!
The great scandal of the western world
if i am to be alone they will never lock me up...
A lonely life, remnants of the days of yesteryear.
So melancholic and very true...a statement
What an outstanding line 'no worries; no joy' This made the whole poem so real. This is where the extreme sadness just oozed out! Really good write.
Solid piece.
Sad, but real. You hit the tone and the heart of the photo. Great work.Henry Clemmons
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Such appears the fate of many forgotten elderly individuals living out their days. Lonely and alone indeed.
so sad but true ...thank you for sharing
it's so sad sometimes when they are left in a world on their own..much loneliness in your lines..
Quite the melancholy bit...I too saw a certain sadness in the prompt, the loneliness...
Just makes you want to cry!
The great scandal of the western world
if i am to be alone they will never lock me up...
A lonely life, remnants of the days of yesteryear.
So melancholic and very true...
a statement
What an outstanding line 'no worries; no joy' This made the whole poem so real. This is where the extreme sadness just oozed out! Really good write.
Solid piece.
Sad, but real. You hit the tone and the heart of the photo. Great work.
Henry Clemmons
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