I loved it Gigi Ann! Thanks for opening this up and letting me read it. It was wonderful and brought back some awesome childhood memories of me playing in the grass in the fields near my home in South Texas. Hope to be reading more of you. Be blessed.
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Awww! I love this! I know it's sad that she loses her umbrella, but I love the use of rhyme and the beat of it. Fabulous job!
Very cute. Fits perfectly. : )
Very nice poem! Great use of the prompt!
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very light take.
enjoyed it.
Wonderfully fun write!
a pleasant read, well done.
vivid description on how you got to fly.
love it.
Wonderfully fun, this was a pleasure to read, thanks!
A sweet poem about gracefully letting go; I enjoyed it greatly.
Loved it, Gigi Ann!! very sweet indeed. Blessings, Terri
delightful thoughts, well done.
Ah, so sweet! beautiful image
Lovely!
I loved it Gigi Ann! Thanks for opening this up and letting me read it. It was wonderful and brought back some awesome childhood memories of me playing in the grass in the fields near my home in South Texas.
Hope to be reading more of you. Be blessed.
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Lovely, should be in a chilren's book for this poem would make
any child's day sunny.
this is a very nice poem and so true how they can fly away on you.Or turn inside out. lol
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