Saturday, September 3, 2011

"Swim Time?"

photo by Oma Jill of my Great-Grandson Evan
poem by Gigi Ann
Swim Time?
Look at silly Evan 
trying to swim in the sink
In the sink he won't sink
I don't think he could sink in the sink
Could he sink in the sink
What do you think?
Would you like to swim in the sink?
Give me a wink if you think
You want to swim in the sink
What do you think
Could you really swim in the sink?

I was in a Dr. Seuss frame of mind today!

11 comments:

The Cello Strings said...

what fun word play.
he is cute in the tub.

;)

Jack Edwards Poetry said...

Wonderful master of words and rhyme. Well written and funny.

Here is my entry:
http://jackedwardspoetry.blogspot.com/2011/09/brothers.html

charleslmashburn said...

I won't fit in the sink!

http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/09/02/the-grouchy-old-man-2/

Rinkly Rimes said...

To answer you I thought a thunk,
But I simply failed and now I'm sunk!

Rose said...

Aw, he's so so cute. I love your little dr. seuss inspired poem! Perfect - sinks are to swim in not to sink in - me thinks:)

The Purple said...

way too cute.

thanks for sharing.

Ann LeFlore said...

Wow amazing photos and so funny thank you for sharing
http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/09/04/haggle-baggily/

Morning said...

smiles.

love this cute piece.

The Orange Tree said...

smiling time,
smiles.

allyson jude said...

lovely written. :)
read my poem for week 9 here :)

After Midnight

blackswanpoetry said...

lol nice