Shadows Of My Mind: "Swim Time?"

Saturday, September 3, 2011

photo by Oma Jill of my Great-Grandson Evan

poem by Gigi Ann

Swim Time?

Look at silly Evan

trying to swim in the sink

In the sink he won't sink

I don't think he could sink in the sink

Could he sink in the sink

What do you think?

Would you like to swim in the sink?

Give me a wink if you think

You want to swim in the sink

What do you think

Could you really swim in the sink?

I was in a Dr. Seuss frame of mind today!

The Purple Treehouse

Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hall said...: what fun word play.
he is cute in the tub.

;); September 3, 2011 at 6:06 PM
Jack Edwards Poetry said...: Wonderful master of words and rhyme. Well written and funny.

Here is my entry:
http://jackedwardspoetry.blogspot.com/2011/09/brothers.html; September 3, 2011 at 7:25 PM
Anonymous said...: I won't fit in the sink!

http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/09/02/the-grouchy-old-man-2/; September 3, 2011 at 7:31 PM
Rinkly Rimes said...: To answer you I thought a thunk,
But I simply failed and now I'm sunk!; September 4, 2011 at 3:44 AM
Rose said...: Aw, he's so so cute. I love your little dr. seuss inspired poem! Perfect - sinks are to swim in not to sink in - me thinks:); September 5, 2011 at 2:46 PM
Anonymous said...: way too cute.

thanks for sharing.; September 6, 2011 at 10:38 AM
Ann LeFlore said...: Wow amazing photos and so funny thank you for sharing
http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/09/04/haggle-baggily/; September 9, 2011 at 4:59 PM
Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson Barry said...: smiles.

love this cute piece.; October 16, 2011 at 5:07 PM
Pat-Mather Brown Gordon-ceton said...: smiling time,
smiles.; October 16, 2011 at 6:38 PM
Unknown said...: lovely written. :)
read my poem for week 9 here :)

After Midnight; October 17, 2011 at 10:57 AM
Anonymous said...: lol nice; October 17, 2011 at 8:44 PM